“I wait outside the pilgrim’s door with insufficient schemes…”

[This is the first of four blog posts focusing on F. Scott Fitzgerald’s medieval-themed stories. The second post can be found here, the third one is here, and the fourth one is here. If it matters to you, please be aware that these posts about obscure, 80-year-old stories are pock-marked with spoilers.]

Two weeks ago, a footnote jumped out at me like a desperate spark from a dwindling fire. A scholar had ignored what was, to me, a marvel, rushing past it with such haste that he obviously couldn’t dream that I’d want to know more. For eleven years I’ve used this blog to root out medievalism in weird corners of American life—but it had never occurred to me that F. Scott Fitzgerald, of all people, was, for a while, obsessed with writing  fiction set in medieval Europe.

But then maybe I’m the only person who didn’t know that in the waning years of his too-short life, Fitzgerald published four medieval-themed short stories in the women’s magazine Redbook in the hope of turning them into his great comeback work: Philippe, Count of Darkness, a novel set in ninth-century France.

The Philippe stories take effort to locate and patience to read. Fitzgerald’s daughter, I’ve learned, thought they were awful, and only one has been reprinted. I tracked down the necessary back issues of Redbook, half-expecting to find that these stories were the El Dorado of forgotten American medievalism, legends that inspired only folly—but after a few clicks on Ebay it was in my hands: the first story, “In the Darkest Hour,” from the October 1934 issue, where evocative illustrations by Saul Tepper make you long for more from the facing-page ads for soup, sink cleaner, and booze.

What can I tell you about “In the Darkest Hour”? It’s so unlike anything I’ve read by Fitzgerald that if I hadn’t seen his byline on the cover of its crumbling original source, I wouldn’t believe he had written it.

The plot is simple. Spoiler alert: It’s A.D. 872 in the Loire valley, and Philippe, having been whisked away to Andalusia as a child and raised as the stepson of the Muslim vizier, returns to Villefranche as an adult to reclaim his ancestral lands and fulfill his duties as the rightful count. When he finds his homeland ravaged by Vikings and his ignorant subjects scrounging through rubble, he rallies a small band of dubious locals, instructs them in rudimentary horsemanship, and sets them up on mules and donkeys,

as grotesque a caricature of chivalry as could be imagined. Nevertheless, mounted they all were, after a fashion; and Philippe’s idea was a prefiguration of an age already beginning, when mounted men were to take over the shaping of feudal Europe.

Philippe’s pathetic remnant defeats a small band of predatory Norsemen, inspired in part by their count’s promise: He’ll protect his people and keep the peace, in exchange for their good service. Thus by one man, sayeth Fitzgerald, is feudalism invented:

There are epochs when certain things sing in the air, and certain strong courageous men hear them intuitively long before the rest. This was an epoch of disturbance and change; all over Europe men were thinking exactly like Philippe, taking directions from the arrows of history that seemed to float dimly overhead. Each of those men thought himself to be alone, but really each was an instrument of response to a great human need. Each knew that the spirit of man was at low tide; each one felt in himself the necessity of seizing power by force and cunning.

This might be wieldy stuff in the hands of a writer like “Conan” creator Robert E. Howard, who knew that readers clamored for vivid, thrilling tales. They wanted to smell a dank battlefield, feel the rough grip of a spear, sink deep into realms ruled purely by muscle and brawn. The best pulp writers were enwound in their worldviews and knew without doubt what they wanted to say. Fitzgerald isn’t at home here; you can see it in his failing prose. In “certain things sing in the air,” “certain things” should be something more specific, something more evocative of the medieval mind, ideally something that sings. Arrows, though deadly, are too small and fragile to represent the larger forces of history when used so concretely, and saying they only “seemed” to float overhead (rather than speed, whistle, rush, or fly) makes for a week, feeble image. “An instrument of response” evokes nothing specific; a civilizational “low tide” is a cliché. And then after the climactic battle, which ought to leave us feeling like Western civilization is at stake, Fitzgerald observes, lazily: “It was a busy day.”

You’ll search in vain for one sentence in “In the Darkest Hour” that’s worthy of the author of The Great Gatsby. You will, however, find hoard-loads of dialect. People in this story speaks like hard-boiled 1930s gangsters at a poker game in the Old West. Philippe greets the first person he sees with “Howdy! God save you!” and asks “hey, where’s this place at?” When a monk is reluctant to join the fight, Philippe thinks “he’s yellow!” and tells the monk he plans “to protect the jakes.” One local declares: “High time somebody did somethin’ around here. Everything’s rottin’ away.”

I suppose Fitzgerald wants the anachronistic dialect to draw meaningful connections between 1934 and 872, but it’s neither consistent nor emphatic enough to conjure the wisp of a metaphor. In addition to Philippe the Franco-Andalusian expat, we also meet Irish monks, French peasants, and Norsemen, all of whom distrust each other based on differences in appearance and speech. Fitzgerald is hyper-aware of the fact that medieval Europe wasn’t culturally homogeneous, but in a story that otherwise says everything and implies nothing—”[i]t was a desolate countryside, the more so, as there was evidence here and there that it had been once been highly cultivated”—he doesn’t give us a hint as to what he thinks this clash of cultures ought to mean in 1934.

Fitzgerald’s fascination with the Middle Ages surprised me, but maybe it shouldn’t. Raised in a Catholic family, he spent his truncated college years at Princeton, where he read Oswald Spengler’s Decline of the West and volumes of early Celtic history on a campus of recently built Gothic halls. By the time he published “In the Darkest Hour” in 1934, American museums were increasing their medieval collections, the cranky medieval-obsessed church architect Ralph Adams Cram had recently been on the cover of Time magazine, and the New York Times was reporting that 370,000 children nationwide were enrolled in youth clubs that preached the virtues of knighthood and chivalry. We think of Fitzgerald as a chronicler of his times, but I think he wanted to understand the foolishness of his era in a much grander scheme, more so than most of us realized.

In The Medievalist Impulse in American Literature: Twain, Adams, Fitzgerald, and Hemingway, Kim Moreland argues that Jay Gatsby is a modern adherent of medieval courtly love. Gatsby navigates a set of rules in the service of adultery and practices a religion of love, “a commitment to the dream, the ideal, the essential, rather than the material, the accidental, the existential…a desire for mystical transcendence.” According to Moreland, Fitzgerald’s own fleur-de-lys fancies eventually withered:

In his novels Fitzgerald explores the cost of a modern allegiance to the courtly model. Yet the validity of the model itself is not seriously called into question. Only in Fitzgerald’s unfinished last novel, The Last Tycoon, does he suggest that the male protagonist perhaps errs in desiring a courtly relationship, that his desire for a courtly lady rather than a modern women might be misbegotten.

In need of new matière, Fitzgerald looked again to the Middle Ages and wrote—what? “In the Darkest Hour” isn’t sufficiently lurid to join the ranks of the best (or even the middling) historical pulp fiction of its era. You’d never know that the author of this flat, prolix story had written sentence after eloquent sentence in Gatsby, a novel that reveres the reader’s powers of inference. Did something other than escapism make a keen observer of his own times look back a thousand years for fresh new things to say?

An editorial note at the end of the story offers a clue: “F. Scott Fitzgerald has written another vivid drama of the dark ages which even more significantly illuminates recent events in Europe and which will appear in an early issue.” Almost nobody delves into medievalism because they wish they had lived in the real Middle Ages; like many before him and many since, Fitzgerald grabs at a medieval metaphor to help him make sense of the here and now. But is the devastated and chaotic Loire valley of “In the Darkest Hour” the Europe of rising fascism and Nazism? A nation wrecked by the Great Depression? An America greatly changed by immigration? There’s little in the story itself that encourages a reader to see anything here but stilted actors in medieval dress.

But then there’s this, a remarkable jotting from Fitzgerald’s notes: “Just as Stendahl’s portrait of a Byronic man made Le Rouge et Noir so couldn’t my portrait of Ernest as Philippe make the real modern man.” Yes, “Ernest,” that Ernest: Philippe, the Spanish-raised French nobleman, is Ernest Hemingway transported to early medieval Europe, where he’ll crack a few skulls and rebuild civilization.

Cheerless after his first modest victory, Philippe holds vigil while weaker men sleep: “Let the others get tired,” he sneers. “I keep the watch.” The closing line of “In the Darkest Hour” sets up Philippe as an indispensable savior: “Embodying in himself alone the future of his race, he walked to and fro in the starry darkness.”

The future of his race. The human race? Christian Europe? Or just the medieval French? As a stand-in for what or for whom? Does it matter that Philippe has blue-blooded authority but is a stranger in his own land? What so ails the world in 1934 that Ernest Hemingway in medieval kit is the only man who can save it?

My questions may be futile. One scholar has called the publication of the Philippe stories by Redbook “an act of charity toward an author in decline.” I don’t doubt he’s right, but in future blog posts I’ll slog through the three later Philippe stories—not to sully the memory of Fitzgerald, whose best work places him safely beyond embarrassment, but to figure out what the heck inspired his obsessive rooting through the rubble of medieval Europe. I want to know what he was looking for, and why he failed so badly to find it.

15 thoughts on ““I wait outside the pilgrim’s door with insufficient schemes…”

  1. Oh my God. Better you than me, mate 🙂

    But this is fascinating! Thank you.

    There’s a great description of the inter-war “medievalist youth club” impulse in the biolgraphy of Iris Murdoch I just read: in her school boys and girls rose through the medieval ranks to become lords and ladies and possibly kings (in flat disregard of basically everything genuinely feudal).


  2. Wow — what a surprise. Steinbeck did the same, as I am sure you know, going back to the Arthur stories, but somehow it seems a lot less surprising in his case. (And he did a great job.) I have had a brittle relationship with Fitzgerald’s work for a long time. I just don’t seem to see the genius that others do in his work. But with these medieval tales, maybe he fell into the trap that one of my sci-fi class students observed after having watched Ridley Scott’s LEGEND in class. She said she felt as if Scott didn’t have enough respect for the fantasy genre; that he saw working in the genre as an excuse to make a flabby movie. It’s hard to say, not having read these, but could Fitzgerald have seen it as more of a romp? (Seems this is not fantasy, but, same principal? — they are just medieval stories…?) Awesome discuvery, though. You must have been giddy. 🙂


  3. Kate: Thanks for stopping by!

    Dale: You just made my day. I’ve been reading up on those boys’ clubs (which inspired, and were eventually subsumed by, the scouting movement), and except for published guidebooks, very little ephemera from them has survived. I wasn’t aware of any personal recollections of their later, lingering influence—until now. I owe you an avocado or something!

    Chris: Good questions. This first story in the series, at least, is too ponderous and solemn to be a “romp.” Fitzgerald has serious stuff he wants to say, but he just can’t begin to make it work. That said, I think you’re on the right track: Fitzgerald doesn’t fully get his new chosen genre. He was born at a time when he would have been immersed in medieval-themed books like Sidney Lanier’s The Boy’s King Arthur as a kid, and I’d love to know if he read pulp magazines in his youth, but he does remind me of current literary authors who make a big to-do about writing a novel with shopworn science-fiction or fantasy tropes and then act as if they’ve invented the genre. Thanks for that—it’s a very apt comparison.


    1. As one of the other few people to have read Fitzgerald’s medieval stories, I really enjoyed this series. Thank you!

      Yes, Fitzgerald read pulps, or at least dime magazines in his youth. In his Ledger he writes about ‘The thrill of the “Washington in the West” & “Raiding with Morgan” series in their crisp tissue wrappers’, and his first stories for his school magazines are very much in the dime novel manner. You can read the Ledger here: https://digital.tcl.sc.edu/digital/collection/fitz/id/0 and see how much he got paid for the first few Philippe stories as well as stories of his youth.


  4. How odd. Stendhal knew Byron, but placed Julien Sorel in the France of the 1820s, not the 700s. And Sorel’s victories (and Byron’s) did not last, did they? Hemingway might exemplify the modern man (a troubling thought, though Esquire if not Redbook seemed to think so), but I have a hard time seeing him as a savior of civilization.

    Flaubert was fortunate to have friends who told him to burn an early historical novel. To be fair, he was fortunate also in not needing the income it would bring in.


  5. George: Thanks for stopping by! Indeed, it’s a rather strange move by Fitzgerald, and I don’t imagine he had many friends looking out for him in the latter stage of his drinking-himself-to-death phase. Having read the second of the four stories last night, I’m surprised Redbook (of all magazines!) published them, but it’s telling that the covers of the issues that contain the other three stories don’t tout the Fitzgerald stories within.


  6. Chris, I obsessed on Steinbeck’s Tales of King Arthur at a certain age.

    Jeff, this is one of those things I might have to find for myself. In the meantime, I will certainly stay tuned as you make your way through these!


  7. Diane, I’d be happy to find a way to get these stories to you! Now that I’m gearing up to write the second of four blog posts about them, I’m finding that they do live up to their reputation as disappointments. Still, something useful may yet be learned from them. I certainly don’t think it was foolish or ill-conceived for Fitzgerald to try new genres and material, if his changing world-view really did render his existing bag of tricks obsolete. But I’m getting ahead of myself….


  8. This is so interesting. (I’ve been plowing through–mostly–wretched early modern takes on the Middle Ages, so this is a nice change-up!)


  9. Thanks for stopping by, Flavia! Lately I’ve been reading about uses of the Anglo-Saxons for propaganda purposes in early modern England by church and state alike. I’d be curious to know if your research involves any of that.


  10. Brilliant dig! And it fits so nicely into your medievalism-in-America concerns.

    “You’ll search in vain for one sentence in “In the Darkest Hour” that’s worthy of the author of The Great Gatsby.”


    This is an apt comparison: “but he does remind me of current literary authors who make a big to-do about writing a novel with shopworn science-fiction or fantasy tropes and then act as if they’ve invented the genre.” That’s so annoying to genre writers! You can see them dancing around in frenzy when that happens!

    Maybe he was after (at times) something more hip, consciously mixing old and new for an almost comic effect? But it surely does not work. You’re right; Howard would have known what to do with this material.

    Ernest Hemingway as medieval hero… Priceless.

    Interesting comments, too.


  11. Thanks for stopping by, Marly!

    Yeah, I think Fitzgerald was definitely lost when he tried to leap headlong into historical fiction. He had no idea how his narrator should sound, and he didn’t know how to intertwine anachronistic dialogue with his medieval setting. With better planning, he could have given these stories a jarring immediacy and dark sense of humor. If he had lived longer, with time to let his whims develop, he would have written something really memorable.

    And yes, who (other than Fitzgerald scholars) knew Fitzgerald literally wrote Hemingway as a medieval hero and literally the creator of feudalism? It’s wild. These stories aren’t good, but they help me understand Fitzgerald better than I did before.


  12. I wonder if he just did not have time to let the story sit and discover what was weak… Time tells us so much. If we have time. Perhaps he simply could not wait.


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